Maybe we aren't meant to live like this
So far apart
So lonely
Like the sun and the moon
They never see one another
But they know they are there
Like us
Distance
And time
Separation
Pain
But one day we will understand
One day we will understand why
Why we are meant to live like this
so far apart
So lonely
This is really deep but really romantic in a way. I very much enjoy this! :)
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you compared yourself and the other person to the moon and sun.
ReplyDeleteI loved the moon and sun idea as well very romantic and beautiful
ReplyDeleteI very much enjoyed this! It was deep and really conveyed emotion!
ReplyDeleteoh my gosh rosie powell. You are a mastermind. I love the look, and vibe of your blog, and all your poems. I may just be your biggest fan.
ReplyDeletewhoa. That was really deep and you did really good on really putting the mood into the words. You did a really good job on this
ReplyDeletei loved how you used the moon and the sun to compare it, and how i got the image so well in my mind.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the comparison between the sun and moon it helps to make a picture in my head.
ReplyDeleteI can totally relate when it comes to being an introvert and feeling to far away from those you want to be close to. I really like how you compared it to the sun and moon. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteMajestic
ReplyDeleteit took me a second to see the moon and the sun! that's way cool
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